My favorite sport is football. I was a member of our football team.
Anyone may borrow books, and it cost nothing to borrow them.
The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.
由and, or, but, either...or..., neither...nor..., not only...but also..., as well as等并列连词和词组连接的结构可称为平行结构。
It was very kind of them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home.
We study quite a few subject, such as Maths, Chinese...
quite a few 只能修饰复数名词，故subject应改为subjects。
Most people can quickly get help from a doctor or go to a hospital sincethey are ill.
根据行文逻辑，这里不该由since来引导原因状语从句，而应是when / whenever或if来引导时间或条件状语从句。
They did not want me to do any work at home; they want me to devote all my time to my studies. (did改为do，错误类型属于①)
As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. (visiting改为visited，错误类型属于②)
One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. (was改为were，错误类型属于③)
There will an important game next month. (will后加be，错误类型属于④)
I’ll get good marks in all my subject. (subject改为subjects)
Their word were a great encouragement to me. (word改为words)
Without enough knowledges, you can never teach well. (knowledges改为knowledge)
We maybe one family and live under a same roof. (a改为the，the same是固定搭配)
As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of pants. (mountain是可数名词需用冠词，所以其前加a)
I hope you have pleasant journey. (journey是可数名词，故have后加a)
I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together. (time是名词，要用形容词wonderful修饰)
My pronunciation was terribly. (was后用形容词，terribly改为terrible)
Soon I began to enjoy talking to myself on paper as I was learning to express mein simple English. (me改为myself)
One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. (to前加it)
If anyone of us had any difficulty in our life and study, the other would help him out. (other后加-s)
What’s more, you have to be friends with your pupils and take good care of him. (him改为them)
Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper. (enjoy后需接动名词，talk改为talking)
But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports. (go作主语，应改为going)
Children may not develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. (介词后用动名词形式作宾语，read改为reading)
I particularly enjoyed driving through the countryside with you and saw the changing colors of the leaves on the trees. (and连接的动名词前后不一致，故saw改为seeing)
There are too many people among my family. (among改为in，in my family为固定搭配)
I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow. (去掉at，the moment引导从句)